Bao said (in audio critique, I transcribed):
Hi you said this artwork already done, but I still have a little bit suggestion for this picture. For example, if you put letter A, I mark here, this a warm color to the letter B, that areas, and make this composition it looks more stronger and more subtlety because right now that red circle brush strokes really strong and too individual at in that area. If we have a little bit the other darker warm color right there create subtlety for this composition and also make this red circle brushstrokes feel much more sensitive, much more interesting. So if you have a chance you can try out a little bit more warmer color on the letter B, I think this artwork feel much more sensitive and much stronger, show the subtlety.
I looked through your whole the paintings. I think you are going through a right direction on the way. You can continue to work on your process. Continue to keep the confidence and the bold and try to use the variety, different way to show your feeling, and go through your favorite elements in abstract. You have a really good sense and really sensitive to use like the lines, this kind of language for the abstract art. I think is really good. You use the lines it is really strong and show your feelings and also variety create the interesting composition. So your shape and the form and the color it is follow the structure of the lines for your abstract composition. So therefore the lines, it’s really important elements for your abstract painting. So therefore you can continue the lines, to use the lines and show your feeling about this artwork. Again, so you can continue to work in your own way and so keep going.
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