week 5 crit

Bao said:

5_1-5_4. For these four paintings I think close to finish because the whole elements is a consistency and unity create a really strong mood and also the effect for whole over composition. Sometimes for the abstract painting be careful and don’t overdo it. Sometimes would rather leave some part not complete perfect finish. It’s better than make the perfect finish. So therefore, right now I think it’s already done for the whole over the this four abstract compositions.

5_6. It is a really good final effect for the picture. I really like the illusion of space and atmosphere and also like this kind of like sensitive value create a special mood for whole over the composition.  I mark here like the letter a, these kind of the lines if you put some more on the bottom of the composition like the letter b in that areas and still keep it horizontal feel free to make these lines. I think this would be much better. Of course don’t put these lines on the top of the composition just for the bottom, from the middle of this composition to the bottom. So I think this would me much more interesting.